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When I'm Dead
Contributed by
vinnie731
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Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 12:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The tears you’re crying
I’ve cried those tears a thousand times
Shallow and empty
The thoughts of suicide is patronizing
I can’t silences
The voices
I close my eyes
The voices won’t go away
When I'm dead
Do you think I’ll be less lonely?
When
I'm Dead
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2003-01-01 00:20:00]
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Re: When I'm Dead
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by Dark_Angel_BabAy on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 01:13:56 AM AEST
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| Really good, I understand the feeling! |
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Re: When I'm Dead
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 02:48:24 AM AEST
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| There is no death for the universal self and you are a part of it. Vinnie come out of your dippressive mood.Be cheerful always. Keep a smile on your face..Venkat |
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Re: When I'm Dead
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 10:12:55 AM AEST
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| Vinnie,keep your chin up, Things will get better for you! Good write! Christina |
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Re: When I'm Dead
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 07:03:29 PM AEST
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You don't know how many memories this brought back. The lines, 'I can't silence, The voices, I close my eyes, The voices won't go away.' wow... that brought back a lot of pain and hurt. Wow awesome poem.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: When I'm Dead
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by lilch4ever on
Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 05:25:09 PM AEST
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| So sad but filled with so much pain. Things will get better you have to believe it will. Very good write though. |
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