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The Longest Embrace
Contributed by
eyeris
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Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 10:11:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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There is a vexation behind those sad eyes
It makes my heart ache, I hate long goodbyes
If things could be different and god finally gave me what I want
I would be out of your mind, you're heart I would no longer haunt
My own heart now aches with dull desolation
I long for a time, not so long ago, when you were my salvation
The world was spinning and we both joined in
our hearts were lighter and I felt you there from deep within
We tumbled together, both falling fast
you held out your hand but I missed your grasp
into the darkness I did descend
I lay there motionless, I knew it was the end
So now I bid you farewell, but have to keep from looking you in the face
my only wish is that you know you were my longest embrace
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eyeris
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2005-05-23 22:11:56]
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Re: The Longest Embrace
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by Loche on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 10:21:45 PM AEST
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| I particularly enjoyed the last two verses. Great poem, I hope you don't stop at just one. |
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Re: The Longest Embrace
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 07:22:50 AM AEST
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| Wow! that was freakin amazing!! I liked it so much; it was stock full of feelings and survival. I don't what to say except that you continue to write more. Thanks for sharing! dw |
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Re: The Longest Embrace
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 05:34:04 PM AEST
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Well done! This poem shows a good command of language and poetic expression, and well-penned emotions. Quality work. Keep it up!
Andrew |
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