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Delusions
Contributed by
killer
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Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 11:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Hopeless dreams,
Brought on by desire.
Eternal pain,
Of a never-ending fire.
Swirling thoughts,
Go through my mind.
Torturous feelings,
That can’t be denied.
Delicious poison,
I can’t push away.
Drawn back,
To you day after day.
Mixed signals,
You don’t want me, but still cling to me.
Deluded mind,
Or am I just crazy.
December 29, 2002
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killer
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2002-12-31 23:20:00]
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Re: Delusions
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by viola on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 03:30:11 AM AEST
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| great poem, people can be so much like poison sometimes, you say it well. |
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Re: Delusions
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by darkmind on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 03:52:32 PM AEST
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| yeah ive got one like that who hes with someone else and im glad but he keeps like trying to see me and yeah hes poison and shes a witch good poem |
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Re: Delusions
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by lilch4ever on
Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 05:43:17 PM AEST
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| I like this poem very good and very interesing. Nice write. |
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Re: Delusions
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by tawakwan on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 05:38:44 PM AEST
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| very good.Although puncuation my not of been correct,(if i can even judge),it has a deep feeling,and reads well. |
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