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Little Star Shine On
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 07:44:00 PM in AEST
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The little star shone so bright
Lighting up the darkest night
Those below looked in awe
At what when upward saw
A lightening bug here on earth
Angered by the humans mirth
For with the star shining high
Attention she got was nigh
So the bug flew to heavens height
Looking for the star to fight
Accusing the star of stealing her glory
The scene she made was rather gory
She caused the star to feel so low
She felt she would have to go
But the sun and humans on land
Felt she needed to stay and take a stand
To show this silly little bug
That she was being a total thug
And acting way out of sorts
Truly not being a sport
The lightening bug was acting the twit
And assume she knew what was it
Before she saw the true nature of the star
Who was pure and stronger by far
So shine on if you have clean heart
Don’t let others on you their view depart
For they have no clue
As to what is in the center of you
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2005-05-23 19:44:00]
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Re: Little Star Shine On
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 08:22:47 PM AEST
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Well done, Shari!!!
Michelle is a shining star...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Little Star Shine On
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by shelby on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 08:28:55 PM AEST
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ohhhhh hari this made me cry cept this time its happy tears I love you to pieces my friend you are my sunshine. Im not going anywhere tired of ppl trying to put out my light Ill pm you in a sec
Love you and huge hugs
little star
Michelle
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Re: Little Star Shine On
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by waos on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 11:08:37 PM AEST
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Aww...so sweet...so sweet.
~Kara |
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Re: Little Star Shine On
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 05:04:51 AM AEST
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Awesome, awesome, awesome!
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Little Star Shine On
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 06:42:32 AM AEST
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This poem seems to be very familiar to me..
If you are my old friend Shari (Ilhar)..I would not hesitate to say hugs.. O.k welldone lady. venkat |
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Re: Little Star Shine On
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 02:18:06 AM AEST
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| Very humourful. I give full marks for the imagination that lies behind this little poem.bernard |
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