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A Girl
Contributed by
wizard
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Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 07:42:08 PM in AEST
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There must be a girl
Unlike the rest
The day that I find her
I'll have completed my quest
I'm sure that she's beautiful
Not just in her face
For true beauty hides
In a much deeper place
If I knew where to find her
That's where I'd stay
I'd wait there all night
And into the day
It feels like I miss her
But how can that be
I don't even know her
And she doesn't know me
Someday, I'll find her
And I know what I'll do
I'll read her this poem and say:
"I wrote this for you"
PMC
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Re: A Girl
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 07:54:07 PM AEST
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awesome poem bro...
went right through me..
you gotta put more up..
they'll love ya..
doodily wink
Billy |
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Re: A Girl
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 08:04:40 PM AEST
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| awesome write, i wish you luck on you quest, and can't wait to read more of your work. |
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Re: A Girl
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by brew on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 09:30:08 PM AEST
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AWSSSSSSSSSs.......find her .find her........that is the thing that some ppl can fine. I am in the same boat.
But in differ.waiting on the same but a male.
Beautiful write. Man i would be honered to have that written to me.
Brew~ |
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Re: A Girl
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:44:32 PM AEST
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The more I read ur poetry the more I get hooked to it. You have such a natural talent in writing. Keep it up, Wizard.
PS. I hope ya find that dream girl of urs real soon.
Hugs,
Dreamer |
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Re: A Girl
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 12:46:26 AM AEST
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haha... amazing poem once again. and its funny.. because i almost wrote a poem exactly like this once... or at least wanted to.. in any case it reflects something i feel very strongly as well. love is for everyone, most especially God, but that special missing part... that belongs only to one. we can only pray to be ready for such a privaledge, when that one comes along...
shalom,
joshua |
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Re: A Girl
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 12:47:37 AM AEST
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haha... amazing poem once again. and its funny.. because i almost wrote a poem exactly like this once... or at least wanted to.. in any case it reflects something i feel very strongly as well. love is for everyone, most especially God, but that special missing part... is reserved for a certain place. we can only pray to be ready for such a privaledge, when that one comes along...
shalom,
joshua |
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Re: A Girl
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 11:10:27 PM AEST
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Great poem.There are always someone looking for someone.
Did you go to west rwarwick highschool cause their mescot is the wizard? |
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Re: A Girl
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 09:55:38 PM AEST
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Awww! This whole poem is awesome, but that ending gave me a big ol' smile!
Hopefully you find her soon Wiz, then you can start sharing these great writes with her!
Scorp. |
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Re: A Girl
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by AuthorUnknown on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 04:00:50 AM AEST
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When anger all over the subsequent marty-
know the line of Ottowa, and hundred fourth..
Mystery return to linux..(oops)
But we know who and this-
On glass quell the gopher shape.. to mountain
showman- This is try.
So here I go..
Pay attention for the big success..
or limit present to skin..decay and once over-
This by:
AuthorUnknown:
wingman
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Re: A Girl
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 07:03:14 PM AEST
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Awwwwwww . . . . . . . .
Gosh, this was pure silver! How lovely a write from such a
sweet and gentle heart. Touching to the last. I can relate to
this well. Beautiful work. Just beautiful.
~Breezy
(who, in case you were wondering, feels silver to be far more
shiny and just LOADS more precious than gold. Yup. I shore do!)
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Re: A Girl
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by MisfitMe on
Friday, 22nd December 2006 @ 02:18:19 AM AEST
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Absolutely melted w/ the last line...
I would like to say, " Great job! " but your flow appears so effortless, I can't see equating it w/ work. Sooo, I'll just leave it at, " GREAT!!!"
*teehee*
BigLoveMuchPeace,
~Me |
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