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No Regrets
Contributed by
liz25
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Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 07:26:46 PM in AEST
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Let’s hide, if only for one moment,
Let’s let our souls and eyes be covered and untold.
Where can we go from nowhere that we came from?
Where can we hide from all this gathered smoke?
Can we request ourselves to be unveiled?
When we can both lay still and joined with peace.
I want to save you from my coming troubles,
I hate your memory, your insight, what a tease.
Let’s hide if only for an instant,
Let’s let our lips and ears be shut throughout our kiss.
I want to go where nobody respects us,
Where can we dump the weight and feel the bliss?
I cherish all that mentors never taught me,
I hate your sarcasm, your wisdom and your spite.
I want to hide from everything you know of me,
I hate your depth, your strength, I loathe your appetite.
Let’s hide if only for eternity,
Let’s let our hands and feet lay still together twisted.
I hate your promises, your energy, your kindness,
I want to tare myself from all your hurtful limbs.
Elizabeth Kotcher
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liz25
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Re: No Regrets
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by jeza on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 08:56:47 PM AEST
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this is a good poem i enjoyed it
you will find YDPC is an excllent
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Re: No Regrets
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by heartless_soul on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 10:39:14 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC I hope that you will have as much fun here as we will with you here.
intersting... I dont know what it is about this poem but I do like it and it was well writen (I am going to have to read this over again to understand it can you give me some asitanse please) this was a very well writen poem and I am hopeing to read more from you(of differeny topics) later.
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