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My Intoxicant
Contributed by
eleventoedsloth
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Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 06:04:57 PM in AEST
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Like weak heroine,
You fill my vains, only to leave me empty again.
You're my Nicotine,
Ever so addicting, but you kill me slowly.
Like the rum,
Good for a night of fun, but by morning I'm hugging the sink again.
To my favorite intoxicant,
To my most potent inebriant,
Volitionally I take you, and willingly I die.
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Re: My Intoxicant
(User Rating: 1 ) by Esther on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 06:24:05 PM AEST (User
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Wow! thats is so good!!! I like the way u describe the intoxication. very powerful words. (especially the nicotine part).
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