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I
Contributed by
badsweetsouth
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Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 02:48:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I pushed you away
I counldn't stay.
I built a wall.
I pushed away all.
I don't know why.
I can't cry.
You can't stay.
I know I'll pay.
I made you crawl.
I dropped the ball.
I have no more pie.
Why did you have to lie?
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Re: I
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by Shishke_Bob on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 03:15:57 PM AEST
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welcome to YPDC I hope that you will enjoy yourself here as much as we will in having you.
this is a rather good poem, I know what you mean pain is there to let us know that we are human. I do hope that this is just you writing, but if it is something that you are going through I hope that you will get better soon, I will pray for you too. (Just my opinion I think this poem would have gone well under sad or emotional poetry, just a thought.) hope to read your work later. Be well
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Re: I
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by Fears on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 03:44:43 PM AEST
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good write. Rather sad and i agree that this would have done better in another topic. Keep posting!
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