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Searching for hearts
Contributed by
lostinmyself
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Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 02:23:59 PM in AEST
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I had looked for you each day it seemed,
Just watching for your face.
My eyes would not believe that you were gone.
They searched out every corner,
For they knew this was your place,
But sadly it had seemed that they were wrong.
I breathed for you each day I knew,
Just to hear you speak.
My ears were there just to hear your song.
I thought I heard your voice,
For it was all that I would seek,
But sadly it had seemed that I was wrong.
I wanted you each day, I thought,
You would return to me,
It had to be, I searched for way too long.
I could have felt your touch,
In every touch I knew.
But sadly, I knew that you were gone.
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[I searched for every day of mine,
For reasons I not know,
I wanted to see you just one time,
But I wanted to let go.
For everytime you held my hand,
And kissed me on my lips,
I knew what I had wanted,
And I knew it was not this]
But I needed you so close to me,
Just to say goodbye,
For though I cared with all my heart,
I found my heart had lied.
I knew it true when you had gone,
But I did not miss you still,
This is not where you belong,
Nothing here is real.
Yet I find myself here with you now,
Because I can't let you go....
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Re: Searching for hearts
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by shelby on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 02:27:10 PM AEST
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very beayutiful and flowinf as always Phil
hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Searching for hearts
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 02:34:38 PM AEST
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Beautiful as always..
a loved one is never gone.. for in your heart they stay forever and a day..Stay Strong
very emotional and powerful write,, i love it
~~~Michelle~~~ |
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Re: Searching for hearts
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 02:48:18 PM AEST
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| Oh Philly this is touching. It makes sense - LOTS of sense, even without specifics. You're such a sweetheart and it shows - right in this here poem. *hugs* J. |
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Re: Searching for hearts
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 02:51:39 PM AEST
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It's emotively tragic and i know what you mean.
Yet I find myself here with you now,
Because I can't let you go....
Those words means so much and i love the honesty of this.
Hugs,
Jane xxx |
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Re: Searching for hearts
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by FleurdeSang on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 03:09:46 PM AEST
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So glad to see you back, cheri Phil. Tragic yet beautiful read, my dear friend... Painful, melodies of sorrow and nostalgia... Exquisite imagery and flow. I love this!! Though, I hope you have found happiness, now residing with the one you love. Flawless piece. Thank you so much for sharing with us. All my love. Forever,
Your dear friend/fan,
Stephy! |
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Re: Searching for hearts
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by Shishke_Bob on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 03:09:57 PM AEST
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This was a truly sad poem it had strong emotions in its words and the images they created were tear jerking, I do hope tha you are over this, I will pray for you to feel better, this was a well writen poem it shows real talent which is hard to find (espasaly from me *lol*) hope to read more form you soon Later.
KaBob |
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Re: Searching for hearts
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 03:17:05 PM AEST
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awww philly girl this write is beautiful and flows so well.You always amaze me with your writes.awsome job.
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Re: Searching for hearts
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 04:01:09 PM AEST
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Sometimes, even though we finally realize it is not what we want or need, we cannot let go of that final piece of love. Still knowing it will never come to fruition we still obsesssively grasp for the safety and security of the known. Look deep inside, my sweet, and you will find the strength to finally let go. You can't go to the next step in life with that baggage still in your heart.
Much love,
Rita |
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Re: Searching for hearts
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by irememberyou on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 09:56:25 PM AEST
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I love this poem, it has so much emphasis on this topic, and i bet it all came straight from the heart! great job!
-crystal |
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Re: Searching for hearts
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 01:40:55 AM AEST
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A true master peice of intamacy, you have
been capture by the heart and alowed 2
scream from the soul, yet u chose 2 whisper
with your pain, ever so brilliant, but when
were u not? . . . magnificent, and welcome
back . . .
Dorian Chamber |
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Re: Searching for hearts
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 04:13:20 AM AEST
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Phantabulous Phil !!! Weak ? No ... your drive is just that strong !!! And glad am I for that.
In truth I can't single out a favorite line ... they are all Philly Phabulous !!! * smiles *
( Big Squeezies )
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Searching for hearts
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 02:38:50 PM AEST
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| Wow Philly---this is beautiful...I really enjoyed reading this heartfelt write. I especially like the fourth stanza, and most definitely the strong ending. *hugs* Scorp. |
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Re: Searching for hearts
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by evilfairy on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 11:57:04 PM AEST
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| i realise this must be a very personal poem, so i'm not going to pick it apart...that's unnecesassary. but i liked the second part of your poem much better. it seemed to flow more easily. i think it's because you changed the rhyming structure. :) |
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Re: Searching for hearts
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 11:52:41 AM AEST
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very beautiful.. I loved this. well flowing and well written.
christina
thanx for commenting... |
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Re: Searching for hearts
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 03:01:59 PM AEST
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Well, I know I am sure glad that you did not stop!!
This is so touching, and so full of emotion!!!!
sigh...just wonderful!!!! |
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Re: Searching for hearts
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 01:59:10 AM AEST
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Great flow and superbly written.
Johnny. |
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Re: Searching for hearts
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 11:56:23 AM AEST
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so sad... i can relate to this deeply, excellent poem... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Searching for hearts
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 03:14:09 PM AEST
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Exeellent!!!!
Jenni |
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Re: Searching for hearts
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by pixie on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 01:40:22 PM AEST
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wow, Philly, excellent and so well written like only you knows how to do ;)
huggies
pix xx |
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