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In The Clouds
Contributed by
Vermilion
on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 01:54:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Almost too much
And she is perfect
Not quite enough
But she is worth it
My girl is opening the sky
She is the only one
All night I'd cry
Human voice undone
Scatter my ashes across the river
One last time
My girl is the poreclin beauty
One more time
Scatter my ashes across the river
One last time
My girl is the porcelin beauty
One more time
My girl is waiting in the clouds for me...
Depressing
Worth the wait
So repressing
She stands at the gates
My girl is opening the sky
Can't touch me at night
When I would cry
I gave up the fight
Scatter my ashes across the river
One last time
My girl is the porcelin beauty
One more time
Scatter my ashes across the river
One last time
My girl is the porcelin beauty
One more time
My girl is waiting in the clouds for me...
Almost too much
I can't take it
Not quite enough
I can't break it
My girl, my love, my one
Her voice in my head
Telling me to live on
But I take the ropes instead
Scatter my ashes across the river
One last time
My girl is the porcelin beauty
One more time
Scatter my ashes across the river
One last time
My girl is the porcelin beauty
One more time
My girl is waiting in the clouds for me...
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Vermilion
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2005-05-23 13:54:01]
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Re: In The Clouds
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by Stellar on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 02:03:57 PM AEST
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This was amazing. I was definitely choked up after reading this. I just recently lost someone very important to me, so this poem touched a cord with me.
Keep up the writing. You have a great gift.
Take care
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Re: In The Clouds
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 07:18:16 AM AEST
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| so sad, but soooo beautiful.i liked it. sniff, sniff.well done. u touched my heart! |
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