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Mercy
Contributed by
Blu
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Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 12:28:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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They have come to me
on lambent wings
bearing angellic names
And for each carries a tale
For Raphael
my host of the dawn
burned me with his light
and left me without a voice
except to cry out in silence
Uriel
my shrouded knight of the deep
drug me into darkness
and fed me on ash
though I drank willingly
knowing that I shared his damnation
Gabriel, my Gabriel
his merciful arms opened
so sure of his own salvation
that he offered it to me
with kisses and secret embraces
where I was enfolded in his wings
and wept for the music I heard
And though I have known
the love of gods
I falter still
Longing for the whisper
of the ethereal
my brilliant generals
and their immortal promises
I am still brought to my knees
craving mercy and stillness
from memories of angels.
Copyright ©
Blu
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2005-05-23 12:28:41]
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Re: Mercy
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 03:36:33 PM AEST
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Nice very nice.i really like this write.
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Re: Mercy
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by waos on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 11:15:06 PM AEST
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This was absolutely gorgeous. Showed a lot of feeling, and I totally felt
that my life had similar experiences, though perhaps that's all in how
I interpret this. This was a well rounded all around wonderful poem that is
one of my favorites of all I've read. Awesome work.
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Re: Mercy
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 12:23:05 PM AEST
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| good write I enjoyed reading that, so I thank you......and thanks for the comment |
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Re: Mercy
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by Kayan on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 03:51:33 PM AEST
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I agree with Kara. Gorgeous.
Blu, you need to be doing more with your writing-publish it, get it out for everyone to read.
I guarantee there is an audience for what you have to say.
I love this piece-anguished yet beautiful
Kayan |
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