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Blue and Yellow
Contributed by
solarpiper
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Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 12:18:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Call me blue, call you yellow, call us colours.
Beneath the blue - black water, blue drops
Of liquid laid toe to toe clasp hand in hand.
Above, clear blue droplets fall through clouds.
Backwards - the reflection of an island strewn with
Blue flowers hides beneath the waves – backwards.
Call me blue, call you yellow, call us colours.
I feel down in the mouth of a cave is a nest
Of golden sunshine rolling into burnt orange waves.
Cold blue cliffs are bursting from within are burnt
Orange waves burning the cold waves outside together
Is the rolling, flowing, flowering yellow - blue waves.
You throw yellow sunshine and the frozen sea waves
Finally fall to the beech. Call me blue but moving.
Call you yellow, warmth, living and home.
Call us colours and a metronome, tick, tick, chrome
Reflects both blue and yellow together.
Call us colours, call us blue and burnt yellow.
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2005-05-23 12:18:58]
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Re: Blue and Yellow
(User Rating: 1 )
by Blu on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 12:35:43 PM AEST
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Wow! Beautiful!
I love this piece. Your imagery is so vivid.
I love the metaphores you employed. Touching.
I'll definitely watch out for your work from now on.
Keep them coming
Blu |
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Re: Blue and Yellow
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by gribbs on
Tuesday, 20th November 2007 @ 06:32:13 AM AEST
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| this fixates in my mind as I stare at my blank canvass...nicely written... |
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