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Goodbye
Contributed by
sride686
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Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 10:47:00 AM in AEST
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If you read this you know who you are and I hope you see how much it meant to know you. You've been such a good friend and have touch my life in a time of need and pain well i've been here in Iraq. take care and know I wish the best for you and your in my thoughts and prayers. Bye my good friend....Steve
I’ve lost a friend
And I’ve lost a soul
I’ve lost a life
Now the futures untold
She held me close
With in her heart
So me and her
Would never part
I thought this friend
Would never leave
Now she’s gone
And my heart does bleed
But know your loved
And your thoughts will live
Alive with in my heart
Tell I reach thee end
I’ll live my life
but you’ve touch my soul
With your beautiful heart
that’s as good as gold
So in my prayers
you will remain
And in my thoughts
With all my pain
For we shared are words
And we shared are hearts
We shared are lives
And now we must part
For your pain runs deep
So now you must go
So take your time
But always know
That my thoughts will go
And with you they’ll subside
Forever and ever in tell I die
Copyright ©
sride686
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2005-05-23 10:47:00]
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Re: Goodbye
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by Fears on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 11:09:38 AM AEST
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aww that was so sweet and full with love and emotion and pain. Good write so keep it up!!
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Re: Goodbye
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by mylady on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 11:10:01 AM AEST
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It sad. But you never lose a friend they will be there in your mind .I have met so many people
on the net few day ago i got a e-mail from a person that stop write he came back just to say hi .So friend ever leave they do come back and say hi. |
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Re: Goodbye
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 11:13:23 AM AEST
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awww so much pain and emotion into the piece .awsome write.
Ever need to talk let me know.
hugs |
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Re: Goodbye
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by sean88 on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 12:40:45 PM AEST
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Really lovely poem. I'm sure when your friend reads this it will bring a tear to their eye.
sean xxx |
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Re: Goodbye
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by mina-1 on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 05:24:22 PM AEST
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My dearest friend Steve doesn't matter where I go you'll always be in my heart and prayers. You've touched my heart and shown me love and support. I am so forever grateful my dearest Steve.
Even though I have to go
I'll always keep in touch
For you're a special dear friend
Who I'll miss so very much
You've touched my heart
In so many ways
Brightened up
My gloomy days
So wherever I go
Or whatever I do
Know that You'll
Be in my heart & prayers too
In time my heart will heal
Then I shall be back
When my life is straightened out
I guess I'll be back on track
Dear Steve you are so kind
A wonderful friend like u
Is so hard to find
May God keep u safe
Keep u away from harm
For you're a beautiful friend
With a heart so loving and warm
Good bye for now
But it's not the end
For I shall be back soon
My special dear friend...
Thanks so much for everything Steve. God bless u and keep u safe always and forever.
love from ur friend forever,
~sue~
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Re: Goodbye
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 06:06:11 PM AEST
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I feel so strongly that she will be back. She is and will be missed by many of us. She is a wonderful lady.
Rita |
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Re: Goodbye
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by mannyrich on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 01:21:08 AM AEST
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this is a wonderful poem. it really makes me cry. I am so glad to have a romantic friend like you are.
your friend,
manny |
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Re: Goodbye
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by poet70 on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 01:44:14 AM AEST
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What An awesome way to say good bye to mini-1. she realy loved it allot, so did I , it was so full of feelings, you do know how to let your emotions out on paper, such an awsome gift, one that NOT every one has,something that WE who do have it must cherrish it and appreciate it.
Good writing, and sorry that you will miss her so much, I don't know her as well as you do, and I too will miss her, she seems like a very nice and caring lady.
Tammi |
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