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Black Abyss
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 10:46:08 AM in AEST
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feeling like this is controling me
it clouds my eyes so i cannot see
a philosophical outbreak of pain and tears
an intolerable pulsing of forgotten fears
someone please hold me and squeeze me tight
tell me that things will be alright
take me away from this infinite pain
for in this black abyss i wish not to remain
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Re: Black Abyss
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by sride686 on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 11:37:20 AM AEST
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Wow angle this is truly beautiful and powerful write. I’m sorry for the pain that comes with it but it has so much power and it flows so well. This is one of those poems that has a much deeper side to eat that I plan to save and read again. To many days have I felt this pain and I wish you didn’t. A great write bye a great writer and it was much enjoyed. Take care and keep up the good writes….Steve
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Re: Black Abyss
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by Jaycee on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 12:27:44 PM AEST
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i am sorry for the pain, and can relate. i think that, for the most part, we h ave to take ourselves from the pain, as hard as that is. you can make it out of trhe abyss and i know you have friends that care.
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