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Feeding on Pure Animosity
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 08:52:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The prospective possibility that the waves of fortune would knock me down
The alleged opportunity that the legs of the runners were buried in the ground
Compared to the reality of everything that withstands the brunt of the force
Entailed in the directional pamphlet needed to reorganize the original source
Feeding on pure animosity the serpent attaches its fangs to the skin of man
Bleeding in such a velocity the molecules split like the single atom which first began
Intending on providing a valuable service in the wake of what has just occurred
Lending with high interests on the probable demand of borrowed losses incurred
The justice that the people demand is saved for the finest society has to offer
Only the rich and knowledgeably esteemed can escape starvation when there is mass hunger
A dilemma of paradoxical proportions leaves this thought in incomplete strands
While the solvent solution to the epidemic quandary is rested firmly in my hands
Intuitively I know that the internal motivation behind the peace agreed to is a fraud
That is why precisely the method of delivery is to entice the people and make them applaud
Instinctually I am well aware of the madness that creeps along in civilized bones
That is why I continually prepare for the tiresome doom that impedes the construction of this home.
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Re: Feeding on Pure Animosity
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 12:56:20 AM AEST
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Okay I want to cry when I read a poem this good, and see no one has commented on it!!!
A few things called out to me when I read this (and I could be entirely wrong...!!) self struggle...past relationship woes...worries of an unstable future...dealing with demons...and that obviously this is a great write!! Your expression was flawlessly detailed, the format was good, but surprising, as it's not your norm...Oh, I like the title too!
Well done with this one jyss...
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Re: Feeding on Pure Animosity
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 01:04:24 PM AEST
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| I get your point. I am glad i am not the only one thinking about such things. Thanks for writing this. |
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