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Picture Perfect
Contributed by
broken_wingz
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Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 04:01:10 AM in AEST
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Don't look at me, but through me.
Don't ask me, just tell me.
Mould me into your picture perfect.
Break me and the blame me.
I am useless and stubborn.
I am smart with purpose.
I am everything you wanted of me.
And I am ashamed.
Don't lead me, just push me.
Help me up, then knock me down.
Make me weak, then ask for strength.
Destroy your picture perfect.
I am dirty and I am flawed.
I am young and cold.
I am nothing you ever wanted.
And I know you're ashamed.
Yell at me, then soothe me.
Create and then kill me.
Do what you will if you must.
Because I am your picture perfect.
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Re: Picture Perfect
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by Scarlett on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 04:53:27 AM AEST
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| the short and snappy lines were really effective, made the poem flow well! i enjoyed reading this, thought it was pretty powerful |
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Re: Picture Perfect
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by Sinned on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 05:09:36 AM AEST
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Broken_wingz
Interesting
To me this reads as the struggle of a teenager with her/his mother/father
I think you could have titled it the "struggle",but then I don't know your thought for this poem.
I like the mystery behind it.
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