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Flowers
Contributed by
travisk
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Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 03:19:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Our relationship
Can be symbolized
In the flowers I bring you
from stereotyped habit
Fresh and wondrous
Bright and colorful
Yet after the shortest of whiles,
Quite quickly dead
For I fear,
No matter how many fresh ideas
We may throw
Back and forth
And face to distant face
It will be the miles
Of seemingly lifeless salt water
That will droop, strain, and coldly discard
Any and all of your affections
For one undeserving
Another predictable connection
This comparison brings to light
Lies in the foreseen fact
Of blame's location
Resting solely upon these tired shoulders
Shoulders which falsely claim to know
What stress and suffering of many kinds
Actually weighs
Rotating and extending
Selfish arms in vain
To spare that unbelievably wonderful feeling
From the all-to-common
Death of a cut flower
Copyright ©
travisk
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2005-05-23 03:19:08]
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Re: Flowers
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by venkat on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 05:13:16 AM AEST
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| Amazingly beautiful poem. venkat |
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Re: Flowers
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by candysears on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 07:18:48 PM AEST
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This is a write you should be very proud of...
Oustanding....I love this poem...
I have read several of your poems and you are very talented.
God Bless!
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Re: Flowers
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by Channing on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 07:07:11 PM AEST
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Excellent write, truly impressive show of talent!
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