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Lost
Contributed by
mnk_1112
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Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 12:59:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I fear not inevitabilty,
I can tolerate that-
it's my own weaknesses..
that I can't change things that I've done or failed to do...
You ever have those moments in time
where you'd give anything you could,
you'd offer up your own soul
if it meant you could change something in your life
to make it even the tiniest bit better?
You ever have those nights where you would cry yourself to sleep
but the basin's already been emptied for the day?
Do you daily covet the people who seem "complete" or "whole",
and would you give nearly anything to have a taste at their life?
Do you abhor yourself?
I do.
Thus is my life.
Save me?
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mnk_1112
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2005-05-23 00:59:17]
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Re: Lost
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by emystar on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 01:52:09 AM AEST
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Well we all get lost from time to but u have to save yourself but I will pray for u.
Hang tuff, u can do it.
huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Lost
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by babykitty on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 03:19:53 AM AEST
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| yea i know that feeling. i felt lost when i lost my grandma five years ago. i'm still trying to find myselt. it isn't easy huh? good luck. i'll keep you in my prayers. |
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Re: Lost
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by Scarlett on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 04:29:25 AM AEST
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powerful write that captures emotions that a lot of us have felt.
keep writing |
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