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Our Game
Contributed by
simmy
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Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 12:13:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I can't help it but look at you,
it's so hard for me to see what I see.
I see a BOY that I love,
who doesn't love me.
It's always been about my looks,
when will someone look past.
For you I'll never be enough,
I'll always finish last.
In our little game we play,
I'll always be the one who lost.
I always have to pay,
for my heart will be the cost.
I turn this game arround,
for in our game I win.
You didn't look past my image,
your the one with the sin.
Your the one who messed up,
look at what your missing.
Copyright ©
simmy
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2005-05-23 00:13:52]
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Re: Our Game
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by Scarlett on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 04:21:59 AM AEST
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well written, good rhyme and rhythm. you've caught something we've all been through.
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Re: Our Game
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd December 2005 @ 11:24:44 AM AEST
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wonderful
amazing
awesome
(any other word meaning the same as the words above)
good write, i think we've all been through something like this.
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