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Gaping Hole
Contributed by
PRoachFan
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Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 09:11:22 PM in AEST
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I have this gaping hole
And no one realizes that its there
But it’s tearing through me
I don’t know how to fill it
I have tried in the past
And for a time it was ok
Then ***** happened and it broke open again
I need something or someone to fill it
It’s growing and swelling
I don’t know if I can bear it any longer
The larger it gets the emptier I become
The emptier I become the father away I slip
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Re: Gaping Hole
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by kydistortion69 on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 09:24:03 PM AEST
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| I liked it..good poem...intense |
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Re: Gaping Hole
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 09:33:16 PM AEST
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good poem. i just have to say... don't let go! lots of people feel like this. i know it felt like since oct '04, my heart was taken over by a black hole that eats me from the inside out. just try to help yourself out. find something you like. poetry and track helped me out some and i'm starting to slowly heal from the black hole. and as if my friend dying wasn't enough, one of my best friends left me... but i stuck it out, found others and i'm starting to heal. i know how easy it is to let go, but all you have to do is hold on. poetry is a good part in you- build on it. i hope it works out for the best! keep up the good work!
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Re: Gaping Hole
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by Stellar on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 11:16:59 PM AEST
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It can definitely be a very empty hollow feeling. I don't know if it's something any person will be able to fill for you. Everybody heals differently and I hope that whatever it is you need to fill the hole, will find its way to you soon. Take care and keep writing. Even when it doesn't feel like it, writing helps.
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Re: Gaping Hole
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 08:44:54 AM AEST
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good poem.. i liked it.. i am sorry though that you have this gaping hole inside you. I hope somethings helps you refill it soon..
*hugs*
christina |
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