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Two Girls
Contributed by
bethers_is_my_baby
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Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 08:13:39 PM in AEST
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I don't know how i should feel
we've just met and already
I'm taken by your beauty
the light that shines from your soul
it was once darkened
when your innocence was stolen
if only i had been there to save you
i know i cannot change the past
but i want to be part of your future
to be one with you is all i want
but i cant accept myself
it feels so right
but will they understand
you and me?
the two of us?
or with disgust
will they turn me away?
i don't know how i should act
you say you want me
but I'm not sure if I'm what you need
the light of my soul was dimmed
but you've re-lit the flame
now my heart is all i see you with
you're more than i could ask for
and right in front of me you stand
but I'm not sure if your what i really need
i know i shouldn't care what they think
you've accepted yourself, but i cannot
so around them i shall hide my true feelings
around them we shall hide our love
and all we shall be is two girls.
Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato
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Re: Two Girls
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 08:18:49 PM AEST
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This is a very passionate write.. I can feel the pain that flows thru it. Thank you for sharing your heart with us and I hope it all works out for you both.
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Re: Two Girls
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by high_on_duct_tape on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 09:49:42 PM AEST
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Great poem. expressive about the feelins you hide inside.
You may have heard this before, but it doesn't matter what other people think. If they understand, all is good, if not, thats their problem. You should open yourself to the world. |
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Re: Two Girls
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by Sinned on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 09:04:02 AM AEST
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Bethers_is_my_baby
I read this as a girl girl sexual relationship. If so I hope you stay clear of that.
The word Wo-man--means wife of man.
When all is said and done it is your desision.
Best wishes and please write more.
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Re: Two Girls
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 07:02:07 AM AEST
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| amazing, well done |
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