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Ending Just To Begin
Contributed by
SimplyMe
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Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 08:09:04 PM in AEST
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All the pain i feel and all the tears that fall
All the years i've had simply to end it all
Everytime i woke up i was still here
There was obviously a reason i just couldn't disappear
A reason i can't yet understand
Or a reason i refuse
What is that reason? Why do i always lose?
I just want to go to sleep to never wake up again
Is it really that bad to wish for the end?
I'm here not going anywhere
I'm here but who says i have to care?
I wish i could just wake up and the pain would be gone
I wish it would end but it just keeps on
My life is miserable without a doubt
I just need an escape... a way out
Maybe i can take a knife and do it the old fashioned way
Or take a couple pills and sleep my life away
Every night the end seems so near
But every morning i wake up.. i'm still here
If there really is a purpose for me
Show it to me... let me see
Give me a reason to live again
Make this pain end
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Re: Ending Just To Begin
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 08:28:00 PM AEST
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Hey, Wow I love this poem! I can relate to it so well! its like you came into my mind lol ^_^ I loved the ending very much and this part:
Maybe i can take a knife and do it the old fashioned way
Or take a couple pills and sleep my life away
I don't know what I like about it, I guess it just kinda goes with the flow I really like it lol ^_^ well all and all GREAT WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: Ending Just To Begin
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 09:14:39 PM AEST
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this is a great poem, and i can totally relate. my friend(?) said when i asked him, why god killed my friend and not me. he said the world needs me. but, yeah, how? i can relate. everyday, i want to end. but, hey, we all have to be strong. ending our lives is soo weak. all of us who could let go have to be able to hold on or this world is screwed. if everyone who felt like this killed themselves, 3/4 of the world would be gone and then the 1/4 remaining would feel like the others and kill themselves. so be strong, even if you are alone or not. i survived the death of a close friend this year (were only 14/15) and i refused help from others... but i survived. please be strong and try to make things better. hope it works out!!!
Keep up the good work!!!
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Re: Ending Just To Begin
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 11:09:50 PM AEST
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An essensial peice of writting that expresses the real u, that is your purpose ,2 meet this person and go from there, u posess great
courage 4 it show in your quest 2 face not only who u r, but who u r becoming . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Ending Just To Begin
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by Jimmato on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 12:11:37 AM AEST
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| It just seems so empty and bleak. :( |
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