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Brothers
Contributed by
ForeverAndADay
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Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 07:55:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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Bodies made of light.
(Living Corpses beset in flames.)
The weightlessness one associates with dreams.
(Heavy, like drowning at the bottom of the sea.)
The Ground is soft, we walk in bare feet.
(We cut the soles of our feet daily, and how they bleed.)
The teacher is kind, he is patient and loving.
(He screams, Oh Lord how it terrifies us...)
The light here is not too bright, it settles on our eyes
wonderfully.
(Our eyes sting and burn, so dry that we cannot but shed a tear.)
For eternity up here...we shall live.
(For eternity down here...we shall die.
DNB
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Re: Brothers
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by Tanmaya on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 03:54:09 AM AEST
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| A powerful, compelling write. |
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Re: Brothers
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 05:16:35 PM AEST
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| Thank you... The light above, darkness below. Thank you showing the two examples, saved and unsaved sentences. Bless you... stars unlimited to you... Raquel Leah :D |
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