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Disappearing Trick
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 07:54:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Over the bridge the train is riding
Broadway and 9th its last stop
The house of the one I used to love
Stars at me and dares me to knock
Can’t exactly remember how I got here
I feel as though I was just drawn in
My feet are aching from standing
A gust of wind shook me still
The façade looks familiar
It resembles a clumsy dream
Of when in pieces I arrived there
You in the window,
The focus of this theme
Face the moon on a nightly degree angle
Stand on your head and let the blood rush to you brain
In case you soon begin to reconcile your anger
Make amends for your blunders and don’t complain
The torch of lightning that releases its thunder
Is relit in fury and wrath with frozen rain
In your lap your hands shake
Your leg won’t stop moving
You say it’s an earthquake
Let us stop assuming
This was my entire mistake
Let the theme of the phrase
Assure you of my disappearing trick
Let the note in your mailbox
Be my final commitment
Let this treacherous walk to your street
Mark my solemn and solvent oath
Leave this impartial and complete
For you and I both
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jyssvw22
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2005-05-22 19:54:21]
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Re: Disappearing Trick
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 08:51:07 PM AEST
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What a strange way to end a relationship. Should it not be face to face? Sorry, just strange to me. It seems to leave too many unanswered questions. The poem is great, I just question the method.
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Re: Disappearing Trick
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 09:10:14 PM AEST
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Wow jyss...pretty effective ending there. It's filled with resolve, but with a soft touch. Very nice job with this write.
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