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my passionate desire
Contributed by
freda_burrel
on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 07:14:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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you are the one,
i want it to be.
the desire of one,
is all i see.
passion beyond,
compare so true.
the desire of one,
and that is you.
you feel me up,
a needful thing.
with all the joy,
and love it brings.
beyond desire,
you will fulfill.
just by a touch,
a moment still
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2005-05-22 19:14:17]
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Re: my passionate desire
(User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 07:18:05 PM AEST
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wow this is a powerful poem
well done nice rhyming flow, you've done a good job and captured passion well |
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Re: my passionate desire
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by bethers_is_my_baby on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 08:05:56 PM AEST
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hey, great poem!!!! i loved it!! keep writing!!!:)
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