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Crying Bullets
Contributed by
bobotheclown
on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Shaking from the depression
Washing over me like a 10 ton truck
I try to smile, behind these tears,
But I'm thinking of crying bullets
Then others might know a fraction
Of the pain I must endure
That's not fair? Oh I know
You've yelled and fretted
And bullied and b*****d
I've almost cried, but you don't give a *****
You don't understand
(Although you say you do),
But you only care about your fat belly
You don't care how I feel
My head is hurting
Can't deal with this anymore
Go ahead and dip me in plague
I have no desire to live
For what is living
When you are forbidden love?
I'm going through more than I care to know
I see how you glare
I'm sorry I don't live up to your standards
Stop pushing christianity all over me
It makes me sick
I'm sorry I can't skate
Or bench 200
See... you don't understand or relate
The pain is still heavy
I feel like screaming and cursing,
But oh that wouldn't be right
I'd like for these tears to leave
For these scars to disappear,
But this hole grows ever wider
Please can I know what its like to be happy?
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bobotheclown
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2002-12-31 18:00:00]
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Re: Crying Bullets
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 06:09:51 PM AEST
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joel
hang in there... this was a very good write.
my father was extra tough on my older brother i know the pain he put him through and also physical abuse. but if you hang in there you can overcome this ...i believe in you
Sharon |
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Re: Crying Bullets
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 06:17:05 PM AEST
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This is so sad Joel i hope things get better for you i truly do, i can't say i know what this feels like ....my father passed away when i was 9....my heart is right there with you, you know that....and if you need to talk you know where i am.....thank you for finding the courage and strength to share such a private part of your life through your writings my friend...
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Re: Crying Bullets
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by Chanti on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 02:18:38 AM AEST
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Joel.. try to stay strong.
I dont understand why parents have such high expectations for thier children, and it seems as if all that they care about is themselves, denying us a way to find love in them, i cant tell you why your dad is like this, but if it helps, i hope that in some small way, all of the people here and in your personal life make up for some of the love that you feel you are missing. Remember, we all care about u, and feel free to talk if u ever feel upset about something and need someone to talk to.
Thanks,
Chanti* |
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Re: Crying Bullets
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 02:10:01 PM AEST
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| I can only echo what everyone else has said... |
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Re: Crying Bullets
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by darkmind on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 02:26:24 PM AEST
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| i can identify with this good poem |
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Re: Crying Bullets
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 11:51:14 PM AEST
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First off, this poem doesn't suck!! It's great...sad but good.... I know you have the strength to pull thru this, Joel... Keep writing your beautiful words..the healing will eventually begin..
Jenni |
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Re: Crying Bullets
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by SmokinJoeEvil on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 11:50:48 AM AEST
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| The poem certainly isn't bad. The more self-reliant you become, the better things will get. |
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