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Torn

Contributed by XOashleyreneXO on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 05:23:18 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Only you,
Can make me feel this way.
So confused,
Like I've lost my way.

These feelings are hard to get rid of,
Never knowing how I feel.
Its such a burden to see you here,
Knowing that you won't heal.

You always notice me,
But I want the rest.
It's like I like you at one moment,
And then hate you the next.

I dont know what comes over me,
Its like I have no heart.
I can't understand why you'd like me,
When I pull you like a cart.

The world I knew,
Is totally gone.
But I admit that it has gotten a lot better,
Since you asked me to dance to that song.

I know that I like you,
And I know you like me more.
But I hate the feelings that I get,
When you are torn.

You are a very good friend.
I know you think of me more,
But I'm sorry that I feel this way,
Maybe I'm just a little bit more torn.

I have never felt this way,
I have no idea what to call it.
Maybe a little bit of friendship,
Or a little bit of threat.

I guess I really do like you,
Because I feel great when you are around.
But then I feel a little bit crazy,
And I leave you on the ground.

I pick you up and say I'm sorry,
Because I know that you will forgive me.
I am tired of doin this to you,
So now I will be a little bit more friendly.

Maybe more than a little,
Maybe we can say a lot.
All I know is now I am trying to give you,
All that I got.

This is my new resolution,
And I want you to help me with it.
I am sorry for the way I am,
And now I am trying to fix it!

Copyright © XOashleyreneXO ... [ 2005-05-22 17:23:18]
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Re: Torn (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 07:26:50 PM AEST
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lovely poem! I think everyone feels, that way in part of their life.

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