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Warning Shot
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 11:50:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The situation is what you make of it
The reality is only the starting point
The emotions severed and the pain felt
The irrational ride to unfasten your seat belt and fly
The tree who gives us air, does not sit to think
The flower which milks the bumble-bee, thanks her with a wink
The terrains that have eroded, to give us the beach
The grass on the ground always in close reach
A warning shot goes off in the woods
Hunting season has begun in the hills
The price on my head is now ten thousand fold
A compromise I endowed, my blood was sold
In an instance the image engraved on canvas changes
In a heartbeat the worlds of two strangers collide unfelt
A token of my appreciation to those who came to befriend
A true recognition of what I am willing to lend
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Re: Warning Shot
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 12:18:00 PM AEST
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| I really like this one. I am not sure about the third stanza, but the other three say a lot about life, and your appreciation for people. Good work. J. |
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Re: Warning Shot
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 01:24:33 AM AEST
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Hmmm...I like this one! Very interesting...This is quite different than your usual m.o....Even the wording...the length as well. You're not usually prone to short writes, sometimes...but it's fairly rare. Anyway, for all it's differences, I still enjoyed reading it. I really like this title too : )
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