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Tainted in my eyes

Contributed by Ryoko on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 09:52:10 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Ripping out all the feeling
a stained memory caught in a trap
dead nails clung onto you
How can the forgotten give up?

Tradgedy melts in the rain
seeping trhew my already wet skin
Tears of blood cut my eyes
Where am i now....alone and blind

Tainted withc plagues my mind
buried deep in my solidifed hate
Forseen cuts litter an arm once bleeding
A silver ring remains of a perfect mind

For a night once lost
A heart once shattered
A crack in the stone
Im in ***** pieces at your feet
pick me up, toss me aside
its all i can take to die

My sodomy, its all in your head
a corrupted heart held together with a pure soul
i wake up every morning wishing you were dead
to feel serene, is a thought never realised

I cant look at the misted mirror anymore
my eyes burn hate...aimed at the face staring back
Can your understand whats happening?
Ignorant eyes stare back at me in a lie

Copyright © Ryoko ... [ 2005-05-22 09:52:10]
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Re: Tainted in my eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by sean88 on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 11:34:53 AM AEST
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Very well writen. The visual images although not the nicest are very symbolic of theme in the poem and are used well.

sean xxx

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