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My Dark Room, My Empty Life
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 01:49:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I am so alone in my dark room lit my candles
My dark, empty room
That resembles my soul
My room is so bare
Just like my heart
They all think everything is perfect
They think I am perfect
They believe my smile
But they’re all fools
Because the truth is
I am so hollow inside
So broken filled with nothing
I have no purpose
I am but a worthless shadow
Tell me
Why am I living?
There’s nothing worth living for
My poetry is beginning to fail me
The words are wrong
None of them make sense
I have simply nothing to write about
Just goes to show how EMPTY my life is…
Just like my dark room
Copyright ©
pUnKa_RaCh
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2005-05-22 01:49:39]
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Re: My Dark Room, My Empty Life
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 01:59:50 AM AEST
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wow, I like the substance in this...this is really something...awesome work...passion will drive you, no need to worry
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Re: My Dark Room, My Empty Life
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by Iamyown on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 02:09:23 AM AEST
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| you hit the nail right there that was good the everyday emptiness of my life i felt what you wrote ty!!! |
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Re: My Dark Room, My Empty Life
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 9th May 2010 @ 11:18:20 PM AEST
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| Know exactly how this feels well written |
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