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Black and white photo...Remembering
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 12:54:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I open the year book
For what lies within the page
Is the story of my emotional death
Played out as if on a stage
There YOU are the most beautiful person alive
The first one I ever loved and for whom I dream and strive
Looking at your picture distresses me inside
Saying I didn’t care for you wasn’t the truth I lied
It is hard to admit but I continue to miss you so
As soon as you left I died in a painful way you do not know
You hurt me for I looked upon you but couldn’t have you
The damage is unbreakable no matter what I do
Gazing at your picture I am in anguish my hopes do shake
Your face is so beautiful it causes my heart to break
I still remember your body, your embrace
And most of all your unwavering kiss
I would give anything to have you again
For it is you I sadly miss
That loving smile causes me to think back to the day
When you’re wonderful lips were mine and you wanted me to stay
Of the time when I was happy because you wanted me
Never have I felt so loved you made me everything I wanted to be
I am just so sad I can’t help but let the tears drop
You seem to be the death of me for my heart seems to stop
I am crying because it is you I have lost
Never to see you again…..never
All that I have of you
Are just memories
And this black and white photo…
Copyright ©
pUnKa_RaCh
... [
2005-05-22 00:54:49]
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Re: Black and white photo...Remembering
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 01:45:22 AM AEST
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WOW...this is something that is beautiful beyond words....So sad and hearfelt, brought tears...amazing work...amazing i tell ya
~Clark |
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Re: Black and white photo...Remembering
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 04:36:55 PM AEST
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Oh wow!!! This is so touching.....excellent write.... and boy....can I relate!!
Jenni |
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Re: Black and white photo...Remembering
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by Belcha on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 04:56:41 AM AEST
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Nice poetry, you have plenty of love to give someone, I can feel it in your words.
peace x |
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Re: Black and white photo...Remembering
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by Karazoul on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 06:34:42 PM AEST
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| GOOD POEM I LIKE IT WELL DONE |
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