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Black Tears
Contributed by
Faust
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Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 11:03:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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To see me now would let you see me shedding tears, but don't feel sorry for they are from my fears. You may find it strange to cry for such things, but the ones I have left are such horrid things. They say the good or evil in a man's heart can change him, saying one outways the other. One of the fears, I will say, is living without a lover. As I sit here watching lightening flash and strike, I marvle at the beauty of the night, and if you knew what was in my mind you would have a terrible fright. How I wish I could forget all that I knew, and how I wish I could start life a new. These cursed feelings deep in my heart, they never stop ripping my apart. As tears flow from my eyes they can never flow back, yet I still know not, if from sorrow or evil, what makes my tears black.
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Re: Black Tears
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 12:12:29 AM AEST
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nicely written prose very sad and dark and I
just loved the ending. Very well done.
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Re: Black Tears
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 01:17:47 AM AEST
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i agree...beautifully dark and i can tell from your words this poem is very heartfelt
we all cry black tears.....
great job, very captivating |
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