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Tired
Contributed by
all_the_dead_roses
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Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 09:39:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I'm tired of all the games
I'm tired of all the lies,
i'm tired of your bull*****
filling up my eyes,
I'm tired of your sorrys
I'm tired of the fights,
I'm tired of all the pain
when I lay my head down at night,
i'm tired of the broken hearts
that's nothng more than it seems,
4 1/2 years of heartache
remembering the future in my dreams,
you hurt me once
then once more,
and now it's time
for me to close the door
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2005-05-21 21:39:10]
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Re: Tired
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by poet70 on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 10:40:42 PM AEST
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| Good write, I have been in a place almost to this, so I could relate, keep up the writing, and don't ever stop. You are good at letting out your emotions. and I like that, Tammi |
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Re: Tired
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by Doriens_Picture on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 11:43:38 PM AEST
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| this is a great write a great emotion and i think that you should not have wasted so much time in writing and say and feeling it |
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