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Hope
Contributed by
spazz911
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Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 09:36:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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hope is all i have
faith I dont adore
history is past
I stand alone on floor
first hope, first hurt
first want to die is now
my will let me be
i am on my own now
feel bad when I speak
laughed at for what comes out
i can't control my thoughts
were they ramble, when they're out
all part of gods will desired
if god there be in this world of liars
I can't answer, if there is
my belief in god is my belief in fire
hot and cold and pain alike
all these feeling the night entice
so I hope and pray there is a way
for I need truth and pryers
Nothing but freedom
have they given me
but w/o the guide of soul
I can never be true to my thoughts
Copyright ©
spazz911
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2005-05-21 21:36:07]
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Re: Hope
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by emystar on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 10:06:25 PM AEST
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A bit sad but well said.
Hang in there , my friend, We luv u here.
huggs,
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Re: Hope
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by TheVoice on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 10:19:41 PM AEST
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Spazz,
Maybe you should write more spiritual poetry. This is a very well written piece. My thoughts and prayers are with you.
If you need a friend, email me.
The Voice
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Re: Hope
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by Faust on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 11:09:32 PM AEST
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I really like this poem, but the funny thing is i have a poem of the same name. the differents is mines about someone I had a crush one...anyway, you should really try to persue a career in poetry or some king of writing. I am positive you would do well.
Eternaly Punished,
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Re: Hope
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by blue_angel on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 09:30:43 PM AEST
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see! yer better than me u suck lol... but this is a little bit on the spiritual side for u... kinda weird kc. but still well written. good job.
jennie* |
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