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Full Moon Rising

Contributed by Rakerman1999 on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 08:53:03 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry




I saw a full moon rising
Within the sky so clear
And three stars danced to music
That no one else could hear
The trees looked on in silence
As twilight gained its hold
A rhythm held unchanging
From endless days of old

The crickets sing their chorus
Nocturnal serenade
The same as that first sunset
When Earth was newly made
A nighttime breeze blew softly
A chill upon the air
And I was lost in wonder
And peace beyond compare

'Tis true this world is troubled
'Tis true that man's to blame
But Nature will prevail
In this eternal game
And she will be the victor
O'er hate and greed and lust
While greatest Kings and Kingdoms
Will fade to naught but dust


L. Carling c2005

















Copyright © Rakerman1999 ... [ 2005-05-21 20:53:03]
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Re: Full Moon Rising (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 08:56:45 PM AEST
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That ending is just awesome Larry, the poem was beautiful and captivating, your talent shined thru your words...Amazing

~Clark


Re: Full Moon Rising (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 09:12:45 PM AEST
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I am absolutely moved beyond words...
this poem has everything...
style..
passion..
timing..
imagery

everything!
fantastic write!
amazing..

M.O.H.


Re: Full Moon Rising (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 09:45:08 PM AEST
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a melody upon my screen Larry


Re: Full Moon Rising (User Rating: 1 )
by XxNights_ChildxX on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 09:56:21 PM AEST
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absolutely mesmorizing....wow...great poem
very well written, beautiful immagery here...
good job

Jenni xxoo


Re: Full Moon Rising (User Rating: 1 )
by GingerB on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 10:08:34 PM AEST
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Amazing write, Mr. Carling.

Ginny


Re: Full Moon Rising (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 11:12:44 PM AEST
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Splendiferous Larry;

The universe shall always be the victor and we her awed captives. Just a mere lifetime to enjoy the beauty makes me sad. I do so hope there is reincarnation.

Peace,
Rita


Re: Full Moon Rising (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 12:09:16 AM AEST
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This was spellbinding Larry the ending to
this was very inspiring and uplifting. I loved
the imagery in the first two stanzas its so
good it deserves a Sleeman's! Bottoms up!

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Full Moon Rising (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 12:34:46 AM AEST
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Very visual i like the scenario as i was reading it . . . Barkeep,u know the drill . . .

Dorian Chambers


Re: Full Moon Rising (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 03:40:22 AM AEST
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As always Larry ... flawless flow and wise words make your poetry a delight to read. Thank you for this ... I wholeheartedly agree.

Nazzy ~


Re: Full Moon Rising (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 06:29:55 AM AEST
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Well what more can i say that everyone else has tols you already.

This was great Larry it really is. 5 stars from me.

Jane


Re: Full Moon Rising (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 06:41:13 AM AEST
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A million gold stars for u for this magnificent gorgeous piece of poetry.

Beautiful beyond words


Love Angelxx


Re: Full Moon Rising (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 11:21:31 PM AEST
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Lovely story Larry I loved the sense of
triumph at the end. Definitely a great write.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Full Moon Rising (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 04:04:18 AM AEST
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do you think good triumphs over evil? tonight I feel trampled upon and .. so maybe it's as you've said .. I am the evil.. and this is good making it's triumph ... you think?




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