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Never Fades
Contributed by
onangelswings
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Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 08:28:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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As I look into the mirror
I wonder what I’ll see
I see a tool of God
A tool that’s labeled me
As I go to work I wonder
What the day will bring
It brings me joy and wonder
Filled with new songs to sing
Life will bring me trouble
But my smile never fades
Inside I keep on going
Waiting for another day
Copyright ©
onangelswings
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2005-05-21 20:28:03] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Never Fades
(User Rating: 1 ) by ForeverAlone on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 08:37:09 PM AEST (User
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Short, sweet, and to the point..I like how you used different analogies of the same scence..Nice Job..
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Re: Never Fades
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sinned on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 08:54:24 PM AEST (User
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onangelswings
You put a smile on my face
Lovely little poem
Sinned |
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Re: Never Fades
(User Rating: 1 ) by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 12:30:26 AM AEST (User
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Absolutely beautiful . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Never Fades
(User Rating: 1 ) by irememberyou on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 12:12:59 PM AEST (User
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nice poem i like it! :)
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Re: Never Fades
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 12:23:12 PM AEST (User
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Always so positive, that's what I love about you and your poems...........Mike |
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Re: Never Fades
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 10:24:40 PM AEST (User
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Lovely...I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. |
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