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Code Blue of the heart
Contributed by
emokid
on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 07:44:31 PM in AEST
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Stand up again
another round
we fight
I try to be perfect
I do the best I can
but its not good enough for you
You start another round with me
Here we go
scream
hate
swing at me
one more time
So much hate for someone
i'm supposed to love
unspoken boundry
unseen love
You want me to say I'm sorry
You need to apologise for being cold
code blue of the heart
Broken relationship
no amount of duct tape
no amount of glue
will fix this broken thing now
this broken heart wont beat again
call 911 but its too late
someone needs to pay for this
code blue of the heart
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emokid
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2005-05-21 19:44:31]
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Re: Code Blue of the heart
(User Rating: 1 )
by heartquake on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 03:36:27 PM AEST
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| good write... reads more like a song though....but in a way songs are poems to begin with anyway... i love the title and the use of it in the poem fits the message you are trying to get out too... |
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Re: Code Blue of the heart
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by hotie05 on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 12:24:47 PM AEST
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| it's really good poetry and sad |
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