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Our World
Contributed by
sinned
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Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 07:19:23 PM in AEST
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I can dream a better place
A place of forever peace
I cannot say that will never be
I love to watch each bird flying free
To see white clouds patching a blue sky
I love a soft misty rain to see a rainbow and wonder why
All is given for me to see
O' the forrest o'r a single tree
I see beauty in everything
Our moon and stars and grass evergreen
Gaze at our milkyway our universe ever expanding never ending scienctist say
O'r the beauty of a distant stars twinkle
I love our moon upon it wings of an angel
A great lake an ocean or a little stream
O' yea I dream
I want our world perfect in every way the way it was ment to be
To be like it was with Adam and Eve I know we'll have to wait until the greater day
Upon a cloud as He comes again our way
Thank You is all I may say
Sinned
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Re: Our World
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by emystar on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 09:53:31 PM AEST
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ur welcome, smile.
good writing.huggs,
emy |
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Re: Our World
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by mina-1 on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 01:11:45 AM AEST
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You're welcome my friend Dennis. A beautifully written and expressed piece of poetry. I loved it. Keep up the great writing Dennis. Always a delightful pleasure to read ur brillant work,
*hugs*
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Re: Our World
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 11:01:56 AM AEST
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Yes my dear friend, ever expanding, never ending. No ending to surprises, - that is God.
I love your poem. So soothing and inspring!
There is so much around us that we ought to be so grateful for, and don't even notice.
So much beauty in every little thing.
You have learned to experience it, as so well expressed in your lovely poem.
Fortunate you!
Blessings my friend
Elizabeth Dandy |
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