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''The magic peanut butter jar''
Contributed by
onangelswings
on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 06:28:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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I'm living a dream
That feels so surreal
But I pinch myself
And make sure it's real
It's like a wine glass
Overflowing with smiles
Smiles that must've been misplaced
Back when I was a child
And the wine glass
Has an overflow
All the extra happiness
Needs somewhere to go
So I pick up a piece
And place it in a jar
I keep the jar close
It has a place in my heart
Each extra smile
Has found a place
And in this magic peanut butter jar
There's always extra space
So when I wake up
Feeling happy and free
I put some cheerfulness away
But still take what I need
So when I have a bad day
A day filled with resentment
I reach in my magic peanut butter jar
And take enough for contentment
This magic peanut butter jar
Holds my necessities to survive
When I found this peanut butter jar
It immediately changed my life
Copyright ©
onangelswings
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2005-05-21 18:28:57]
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Re: ''The magic peanut butter jar''
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 08:15:42 PM AEST
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| Everyone should have a jar to keep there hapiness in for rainy days. Great write.........Mike |
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Re: ''The magic peanut butter jar''
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 11:41:09 PM AEST
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Oh, I love this!! Everyone should have a jar of happiness. I keep mine close too so that I can share it if needed. Got a few extra smiles in there you might throw out into the universe for those that have none? Splendid outlook and splendid poem.
Peace,
Rita |
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Re: ''The magic peanut butter jar''
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 12:45:11 AM AEST
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This is an incredible poem not 2 mention i just got through with a peanut butter snack lol very nice, clever write also . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: ''The magic peanut butter jar''
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 03:56:27 PM AEST
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well written, creative and clever, hugs n' love nessa
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