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Seduction in Faith
Contributed by
Blu
on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 06:15:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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I have wandered
the lidded flames under your brow
and found secrets
that you and I share
that you felt inside of me
or looking down
as though
the movement of your body
was the movement of my body
and we both smiled
because I felt it with my hand
where wine was spilled
running down
to where I rose
conquering your body
(as I swayed from your pleasure)
feeling our secret
burn with our fires
the flames that we've created
because it is created in silence-
a song for our ears
a hymn to gods we worship
and we can sing it
let the open window be witness-
the bedroom too-
to our voices
when they grow hurried
with the anticipation
and cry out
with release
the languid movements
prove that we have prayed
(such a seduction in faith)
when bodies meet in prayer
and sing together
and wait for tomorrow night
when I know
I will rise again
out of the trunk of my lover
and wander the fire
behind your eyes.
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Blu
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2005-05-21 18:15:07]
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Re: Seduction in Faith
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by Kayan on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 10:01:44 PM AEST
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My god that was sexy...
I smell a torrid love affair Blu!
Haha! Very very well done, this just oozes sexuality.
Kayan |
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Re: Seduction in Faith
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by harlot20 on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 04:35:00 AM AEST
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| that is really really well written. how youve mixed together faith and sexual tensions. just wonderful. perfect even :) |
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