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What Once I knew
Contributed by
LonelyDork
on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 06:11:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Theres a feeling I thought I knew,
Some people call it love but call it you ,
for without you i wouldn't have known the meaning of love,
your showed me this feeling by the way you are,
your smile, your eyes, and your heart brought me close to it,
I liked this feeling and it's meaning,
for its meaning was you,
But as I grew closer to it something happened,
It grew tired of me and rejected me,
and left me alone,
Now i wonder was it all just a dream,
or did i know Love for sure
My meaning of love is clear and im left to wonder
If you know what the meaning of LOVE is?
Copyright ©
LonelyDork
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2005-05-21 18:11:10]
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Re: What Once I knew
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by Shishke_Bob on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 06:47:14 PM AEST
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Sorry I didnt welcome you in your first poem so... Welcome to YPDC, here is where the poets live. Enjoy.
this was another sad poem to read but it too spoke true and to write anything like that must hurt, be strong things will get better (after they get worse sorry...but tis true.)you use your words well and they creat such wounderful images you do have a good talent. later.
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Re: What Once I knew
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 07:42:23 AM AEST
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| i loved ur piece of work, and the title too.its what caught me 2 read it!bravo! |
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Re: What Once I knew
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by kasean on
Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 02:12:43 AM AEST
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| I really like your poem, And your title is very catchie it pulled me in to want to read it. Nice job |
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