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im so pathetic
Contributed by
bethers_is_my_baby
on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 06:04:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
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its only been ten minutes
since i talked to you last
but already to me it seems
eternity has passed
still eleven hours more
till i can hear your voice again
it seems almost unbearable
the torture will now begin
i did not see this comng
though i knew id miss you greatly
but not till now did i realize
just how hard this would be for me
im hoping i can handel this
though right now im not so sure
just to hear you sweet loving voice
is all im wishing for
i know youve probably
not even left by now
but i still cant help but anticipate
the moment youll be back
if only i could have talked to you
just one short minute more
maybe i wouldnt be so upset
and sitting on the floor
i know im overeactin
cause i know that youll be back
but i just cant stop thinkin about you
yea i know that im pathetic
anywho, i guess im done
cause i cant think of anymore lines
so i guess this rhyme is over now
so try not to laugh at me hun
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Re: im so pathetic
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by Sahara on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 07:16:36 PM AEST
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I wouldn't say that you're pathetic, not at all, I would however say that you are truely inlove.
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Re: im so pathetic
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by brokenwings on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 12:42:10 AM AEST
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| yup being in love will do that to ya.. good job |
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Re: im so pathetic
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 08:33:57 PM AEST
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You are not pathetic in the least!! This was well written. It happens to ppl who are in love!!
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Re: im so pathetic
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by kasean on
Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 02:15:19 AM AEST
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| I LOVED IT! I can totally relate and i hate feelin pathetic when i get a little obsessive. But I think obsessing about someone only means you care about them! |
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