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Why you make me like this
Contributed by
Derpinguin44
on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 05:52:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I love you,
I hate you,
I want you,
I'd rape you.
WHY YOU MAKE ME LIKE THIS!
I'd hold you,
I'd hurt you,
I'd kiss you,
I'd bruise you.
WHY YOU MAKE ME DO THIS!
I'd ***** you,
I'd taste you,
I'd defile you,
I'd take you.
WHY YOU MAKE ME LIKE THIS!
I'd help you,
I'd use you,
I'd nurture and abuse you.
WHY YOU MAKE ME DO THIS!
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Derpinguin44
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2005-05-21 17:52:06]
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Re: Why you make me like this
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by bethers_is_my_baby on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 06:10:04 PM AEST
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| wow, this reminds me of a nirvana song, lots of emotion. good job!:) |
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Re: Why you make me like this
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by brokenwings on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 12:44:57 AM AEST
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| good job.. i liked it.. |
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Re: Why you make me like this
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by kasean on
Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 02:17:55 AM AEST
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| I can honestly say i've felt all of those emotions... and i don't think its at all scary. Good job. I loved it |
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