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fade
Contributed by
feathercut
on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 05:14:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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His eyes just haunt me in
longing
Her broken arms now strain to
hold
i am a ghost waiting for
discovery
eyes locked on a mirror
just shivers
My fists are clenched
heavy as stone
You are the body ive forgotten
Burn like a ciggarette
in the freezing rain
I am breathing not accepting
so dont give me what you cannot
fake
These stars are breaking
i am falling
blood
on the virgin sea
I cannot hope for more than
candles
a life to immitate
me
she rages
tearing up the flowers
Her mother brings them
to her grave
she sits there by her love
for hours
All she can say
is her name
Copyright ©
feathercut
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2005-05-21 17:14:38]
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Re: fade
(User Rating: 1 )
by Fears on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 05:30:37 PM AEST
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| wow, that was verry emotional and i liked it. It stirred my Fellings. |
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Re: fade
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by loopylou on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 05:46:28 PM AEST
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| I really like this poem. I think its one of thoes poems that you can only ever understand if you wrote it, extreemley personal yet many people could appy or use it to comfort them in there lives. |
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