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What Could Have Been
Contributed by
gvlham
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Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 03:32:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Curled up here with a cup of tea
can't keep the cold out of my soul.
A dark sad cloud lays down on me
since you lost your self control.
Was it the look of evil in your eye,
the sound of rage, my fear?
Was it the loss of time we've had
or the silence I now hear?
Every dream is smashed there on the floor,
every hope and fantasy.
All my pride, the honor that I felt
when you walked the isle with me.
Now it's gone like daylight from my heart,
a love that caught a passing wind.
And the tears will stay here for a while,
while I grieve for what could have been.
Just forgiving-not the key,
or the healing of my soul.
It's a burden that's on you,
it's called having self control.
Gary VanLandingham
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gvlham
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2005-05-21 15:32:13]
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Re: What Could Have Been
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 03:49:23 PM AEST
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How very devastating for a young woman believing she was starting a new life with the man she love and he would keep her safe from harm. I feel certain you are counseling her, but he needs deep inner counseling. God bless them both.
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Re: What Could Have Been
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by Anu on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 03:55:30 PM AEST
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| very emotional n touching.....keep it up..n keep writin..well framed into words.. |
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