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Daddy When...
Contributed by
BuggY
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Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 02:37:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Daddy When You Come Home,
You’re Always Drunk,
You Fall Asleep On Your Chair,
And I Have To Look After Your Son.
Daddy When You Are Home,
You Don’t Talk To Me,
You Are Too Drunk To Talk,
Why Are You Doing This Daddy?!
Daddy When You Are Sober,
I Don’t See Much Of You,
I Know Mommy Left You Daddy,
But I’m Here For You.
Daddy When We Went,
I Saw The Pain In Your Eyes,
It Hurt Me So Much,
I Felt So Bad Inside!
Daddy When I Went, I Felt Bad,
But You Really Really Hurt Us,
Daddy, I Am Back Now,
But Daddy You Are Still So Anxious!
Daddy, When My Sister Hit Me,
You Said “Give It A Chance Hayley”
I Did Daddy,
But She Was Hit Me So Violently.
Daddy, When She Hit Me,
I Had Scratches Over My Body Daddy,
She Went To Hit Me Again,
But I Stopped Her Daddy!
Daddy, When That Night Came,
I Couldn’t Take It Anymore,
Mommy Didn’t Know What Was Going On,
As It Was All Behind A Closed Door.
Daddy When I Rang You,
You Asked To Speak To Mom,
She Seemed Puzzled,
Because She Didn’t Know What Was Going On.
Daddy When You Picked Me Up,
I Cried For Ages In The Car,
You Gave Me A Hug Daddy,
And For That You Are A Star!!
Daddy When I Came Home,
Things Were The Same,
I Got In There,
And To The Door, Nanny Came.
Daddy When 3 Weeks Passed,
We Are Back To Square One,
Daddy You’re Drinking Again,
It Is Time To Take Some Action.
Daddy When You Turned To Drink,
Things Changed,
You Cant See It,
But Your Mom And I Have Exchanged
Thoughts.
Daddy When You Fall Asleep,
When You Have Drank Too Much,
Nanny And I Talk,
We Want You To Retouch.
Daddy When You Breath Heavy,
I Think You Are Not Going To Breathe,
Daddy, What Is With The Drinking?
Well At Least You Don’t Seethe!
Daddy, Im Going To Help You,
I’m Going To Do Whatever I Can,
It Is Destroying All Of Us,
But Daddy I Do Have A Plan!!!
Copyright ©
BuggY
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2005-05-21 14:37:30]
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Re: Daddy When...
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 04:05:13 PM AEST
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Full of emotion, and I think the repetitiveness
actually works in this poem. I hope you share this poem with him, and I do hope things improve for you.... Scorp. |
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Re: Daddy When...
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by BuggY on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 04:48:36 PM AEST
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I Dont think i'll share this with him, because i am the type to bottle things up and hope it will all go away. But maybe one day...
Thanks for the comment!!
Hayley-Ree xxx |
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Re: Daddy When...
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 12:04:55 AM AEST
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What a courageous poem. You have showed in this piece, a young persons,willingness to support, stand by and Love this Daddy. Coz by the words you chose, it can been felt and well understood that he needs all the support he can get for himself and the others involved.
Staying strong with the conviction and praying helps . If you believe -he will in time- fix it all.
Whisper |
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