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I LOVE YOU
Contributed by
mandy091706187
on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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SUICIDE DOESNT SEEM LIKE SUCH A CRIME TODAY
CAUSE THE ONLY ONE I LOVE IS LOOKIN THA OTHA WAY
WHY CANT HE SEE WHAT HE MEANS TA ME
HES THA ONLY ONE I LOVE, THA ONLY ONE I NEED
YOU MIGHT NOT WANNA RUIN OUR FRIENDSHIP
BUT IF IT WAS ME AND YOU TOGETHER NOTHIN COULD RUIN THAT RELATIONSHIP
I LOVE YOU
I TRULY DO
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2002-12-31 11:00:00]
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Re: I LOVE YOU
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 10:16:53 AM AEST
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| Mandy, lot of feeling into this short peice good write! ChristinA |
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Re: I LOVE YOU
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 04:59:55 PM AEST
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| It's a short piece but a good piece for your first time. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: I LOVE YOU
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 09:41:07 PM AEST
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| since everyone is commentin on how brief it is i'd like to say that one word can express many feelings and here you show your feelins and this is what you work on so keep up the writing... i also say that because i prefer short stuff to long exagerated poems hehe |
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