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Loving You
Contributed by
juilana
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Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 10:13:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Putting my feelings into words -
Impossible.
For my feelings for you are
Incomprehensible.
If I could let you see the effect you have on me,
You would be blinded.
For if you did the darkness would fade,
Shadows were no longer.
For I am in love,
More in love then I have been for a long time.
I love you is all I can say,
But my heart says more,
There is much more to my love,
Dreams, Hopes, Fantasies,
That all can become realities.
For with you I am a new me,
A me that shouldn't leave.
In these few words I hope you see,
How much you mean to me.
In Life, Love and Spirit,
I want you to hear it,
I Love You!
Copyright ©
juilana
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2005-05-21 10:13:15]
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Re: Loving You
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by Sahara on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 10:28:09 AM AEST
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Beautiful... you're making someone a very lucky person to express not only such a strong emotion, but devotion.
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Re: Loving You
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by Sahara on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 10:29:08 AM AEST
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Beautiful... you're making someone a very lucky person to express not only such a strong emotion, but devotion.
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Re: Loving You
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by Sahara on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 10:32:38 AM AEST
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What I meant to say is....
You are making someone a very lucky person - whether they know it or not; to have not only this strong emotion, but devotion bestowed upon them.
Sonya |
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Re: Loving You
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by somedaylove on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 10:48:29 AM AEST
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| Very nice write........I feel these words to the depth of my soul............keep it up |
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Re: Loving You
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by all_the_dead_roses on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 12:17:47 PM AEST
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| I really liked it. I think it is beautiful, I just hope the person your talking about knows how much they mean to you. : ) |
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