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I Can't Take This.......
Contributed by
mandy091706187
on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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more fighting
more screaming
more pain
more bleeding
what comes next?
should i run?
or get the gun?
should i stay?
will i pay?
all i kno is
i cant take this another day
in the dark
all alone
can i really find a new home?
all these tears
through the years
may one day help me face my fears
no one to turn to
no one who cares
for now i stay
ill put on a fake smile
itll be alright
in a little while
oh god
why me?
why all this misery?
why am i the one with all this pain to go through in my long journey?
i want to go
i want to run
why cant i be the one with all the fun?
i really wanna go
i really wanna die
i want to be where i can spread my wings and fly
take me lord
take me now
no one here
wants me around
no ones sees the pain nor tears
ive seemed to be running strong for 14 long years
i wish i was an angel
flying so high
i want to be soaring
way up in the sky
lord i know you made me
will you please take me back
maybe life wasnt meant for me
all of this pain and suffering i see
i just cant take it
its lasted too long
please forgive me father
for i kno ive been wrong
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Re: I Can't Take This.......
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by vinnie731 on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 10:49:37 AM AEST
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"more fighting
more screaming
more pain
more bleeding
all these tears
through the years
may one day help me face my fears
no one to turn to
no one who cares
for now i stay
ill put on a fake smile
itll be alright
in a little while
i really wanna go
i really wanna die
no ones sees the pain nor tears
ive seemed to be running strong for 14 long years
maybe life wasnt meant for me
all of this pain and suffering i see
i just cant take it
its lasted too long
please forgive me father
for i kno ive been wrong "
this poem makes a lot of sence its the way most people or teens feel but when u are dieing in side always know theirs hope and hoping things look up for the work
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Re: I Can't Take This.......
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by Justice3310 on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 11:03:49 AM AEST
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| Great write on you r feelings I hope that you could find some kind of inner peace sometimes the medicine is prayer and the fact that you are writing your feelings down on paper will realy help good luck and God Bless... |
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Re: I Can't Take This.......
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by mandy091706187 on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 12:47:37 PM AEST
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| Thank you very much and yes it did help to write my feelings down on paper... |
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Re: I Can't Take This.......
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by TiNyOnE on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 02:59:35 PM AEST
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i really liked this poem good work...! i know ***** can get tough... but just rememba somewhere someone does care.... good write...
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Re: I Can't Take This.......
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 04:57:39 PM AEST
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| I'm hoping and praying you get everything worked out Mandy. Very understandable write. Good as well. It's not easy being a teen. Keep your chin up, it's bound to get better. *S* Cynthia |
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