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take control of me
Contributed by
tres_estrellas
on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 07:13:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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This blissful feeling
of you tearing my flesh
The feeling rages
through my body
like a fire
burning
I am screaming
so loudly
but no one hears
I like it like that
A blissful pain
and no one can save me
except for you
You're pulling at my hair
pulling the belt tighter
I love it when you
do this to me
make me hurt
and make me bleed
slash my skin again
and watch it drain
My head is throbbing
my heart is pounding
and I don't want you to stop
watch the needle pierce
right through
and embrace
the gentle sting
Tie me down
and don't let me up
punish me good
I've had enough
of this world
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tres_estrellas
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2005-05-21 07:13:51]
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Re: take control of me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 10:23:50 AM AEST
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Tres
While I don't believe in self harm I do find your poem well written.You do have talent
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Re: take control of me
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 04:22:24 AM AEST
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Re: take control of me
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by blue_angel on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 10:43:48 AM AEST
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hey three stars,
i like a poem i can relate to. i know just how you feel. the first stanza is amazing...
i rilly like this. great job.
luv n hugs,
jennie* xXx |
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